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Site errors.
Posted by: Tantalus (IP Logged)
Date: 24 March, 2008 11:46AM
Boyd,

Just a friendly FYI. In the second line of the second stanza of Witch Dance the word "steps" is left out. It should say

With strange and subtle steps you went;

Also there's a small punctuation error in To the Daemon. There should be a period not a coma after the word "recent", and of course no line space after that.



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