eOldjoe Wrote:
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> A while back in this thread, there was some
> discussion of CAS' poem "Amithaine", which I've
> just recently re-read. I also came across
> comments from CAS on the same poem, which he
> included in a letter to August Derleth in 1950.
> To quote from that letter:
>
> ...what would the typical science fiction fan make
> of a symbolism such as "Whose princes wage
> immortal wars / For beauty with the bale-red
> stars?" He'd probably think the "princes" were
> making war on Aldebaran, or Antares, or repelling
> invaders from Mars or Saturn! instead of battling
> against destiny as symbolized by the "stars" of
> astrology.
>
> Interesting to note CAS' thoughts on what the
> "typical science fiction fan" might make of such a
> poem.
I agree with his conjecture that sci-fi fans might take it as a literal war against one of the red-colored astral bodies, bit I think CAS made a mistake by referring to the "stars" are "bale-red". He basically put it in the minds of the readers that the stars would be reddish, and if in fact he intended the reference to be more generally the bodies governing the Zodiac, he erred.
Me, because of the construction of the passage, I could see that the princes made war "for beauty"--i.e., the highest ephemeral aesthetic--against what seemed to me to be unnamed reddish, threatening symbolic stars.
>
> I included a longer quote from the same letter in
> a blog post:
>
> [
www.desertdweller.net]
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--Sawfish
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