IMAGINE... in Faustine's gilded pleasure-barge gliding down the Amazon in the palæolithic with Krafft-Ebbing at the tiller... an absinthe-sipping Dowson amanuensing an opium-smoking Huysmans paraphrasing a cocaïna-injecting Firbank translating a palimpsestic Syriac edition of the gnostic Gospel of Elagabalus studded in smaragds from Akhenaten's tomb and bound in the breast-skin of La Morte Amoureuse... while Antinoüs anilingues Firbank, Faustine fellates Huysmans, and Delilah dillies Dowson with a strap-on succedaneum of rune-inscribed mastodon-ivory lubricated with the hallucinogenic oil of an anthropophagous orchid from the revenant-haunted jungle of an unknown amethyst moon of Saturn... to the musical accompaniment of a zombie Crowley playing, on a silver-sheathed flute fashioned from the left femur of Cleopatra, Corelli's transcription of Throbbing Gristle's cover of a lost collaboration between Wagner, Dzagdashvili, and Wi(3)-Leu(1)...
Though manifestly well-wordsmythed--the above would be completely incomprehensible to the average reader (I only half understand it myself), and therefore has no use as a tool for trying to explain to someone what CAS is like--which is supposed, in thoery, to be the purpose. However--not a bad parody...even if it is overtly sexual....
Absquatch Wrote:
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> Not that this was a contest (though that might
> have been amusing, too), but ladies and gentlemen,
> I think we have a winner....
K_A_Opperman Wrote:
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> Though manifestly well-wordsmythed--the above
> would be completely incomprehensible to the
> average reader (I only half understand it myself),
> and therefore has no use as a tool for trying to
> explain to someone what CAS is like--which is
> supposed, in thoery, to be the purpose.
> However--not a bad parody...even if it is overtly
> sexual....
Yeah, I think the sex did spoil it a tad, but the 'succedaneum' riff still reads ok.
BTW -- don't anyone let hermself be dillied like that. Serious health issues may ensue. And you WILL spill your absinthe.
Absquatch Wrote:
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> Agreed, pithier is better, but treycelement's
> contribution is so over the top that it merits its
> own separate recognition.
Originally, I tried to include ALL the (main) senses... But I decided it went 222 far. Here's a restored, re-tweaked version, sans sex (nearly):
IMAGINE... in Faustine's gilded pleasure-barge gliding down the Amazon in the palæolithic with Krafft-Ebbing at the tiller... an absinthe-sipping Dowson amanuensing an opium-smoking Huysmans paraphrasing a cocaïna-injecting Firbank translating a palimpsetic Syriac ms. of the gnostic Gospel of Elagabalus bound in the breast-skin of La Morte Amoureuse and studded with smaragds from Akhenaten's tomb... to the musical accompaniment of a zombie Crowley playing, on a silver-sheathed flute fashioned from the left femur of Cleopatra, Corelli's transcription of Throbbing Gristle's cover of a lost collaboration between Wagner, Dzagdashvili, and Wi(3)-Leu(1)... as the essential oils of mandrake, blood-lily, and aconitum fume from a nyctaloptic nigromancer's anaglyptographic alembic... under a ceiling painted in lapis lazuli, molten ruby, and dryad's-coynte-juice by Michelangelo, Delville, and the resurrected maîtres of Lascaux.....
Sir treycelement, on behalf of the Board of Censors, there is one grievous offence in your new version which I cannot overlook...one thing which, I think, may seriously offend some people--this "pleasure barge" business! Just what sort of unwholesome activities go on in that barge? These implications are a danger to the public.
However, the Board is pleased to report that it sees no other offensive content. There were some words whose definitions we were unable to discover--but we have faith in your morality, sir, and will trust that there is no more overtly sexual contet buried within your recondite vocabulary--especially toward the end, where art--generally a wholesome practice--dominates the coyntent--excuse me--content.
A free 'postpone being sacrificed to the Voorqual for one day' card; a vacation to the Isle of the Tortures, complete with the full torture package; an amphora full of aconite-laced Hyperborian hydromel; a date with the enchantress of Sylaire--in a room made of mirrors; a geas-reflecting helmet--constructed from a certain turban-like thing from Yoh Vombis; a free one week necromancy course with Nathaire, Avyctes, or Malygris--your choice, or course....
Or, do you want to go for the BIG prize? It's hidden in the maze of Maal Dweb, surrounded by certain flowers....